Bolashak - Week 10 - Critique and Scholarship

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Critique and Scholarship

Bolashak – Week 8


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Image Image Critique, Criticism, Criticality


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Front Matter Title / Subtitle Authors Abstract Introduction Literature Review Methodology Findings Analysis / Discussion Conclusions References / Bibliography Appendices Anatomy of an Article

Typical ->

We have spent most of the time talking about these sections.


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Front Matter Title / Subtitle Authors Abstract Introduction Literature Review Methodology Findings Analysis / Discussion Conclusions References / Bibliography Appendices Defensive Scholarship

Now we will talk a bit about these sections – and how to defend your research against criticism.


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The ‘loop’ of a research article: from ignorance to knowledge

Introduction:
Asks a research question
Can say why the research question responds to a problem
Often opens up a wide and complete space of research



Analysis / Discussion / Conclusion:
Answers the research question
Can say why the answer forms part of a solution
Can say why the answer is narrow and partial:
includes contribution to the literature
but also limitations and further work


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ImageMy research is novel, vital and rigorous.(Out of my way! I belong to Academia!)

(Now that I’m here…)
But there’s so much work for others still to do.

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Discussion / Conclusion

In other words, use these sections strategically:
Reflect on questions of:
Validity (put simply: are your results true / robust)
Reliability (can your results be generalized - and how?)
IF “My sample is 10 Year 8 students at a high school in Almaty”
THEN Can my results be extended to all:
**“Year 8 students at the same high school in Almaty”
Students (at any level) at the same high school in Almaty”
Year 8 students at any high school in Almaty”
Year 8 students at any high school” (in Kazakhstan / the world)
Etc etc
Discuss
limitations and scope for further work
Consider practical
implications and the meaning** of the research
Remind the reader / review of the contribution of the article to the literature - what gap it fills and why this matters
Preempt, integrate and respond to criticism explicitly: “while this research does not address all concerns about AI in the classroom, it does…”


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Examples

Empirical:
Marsden, L., Munn, L., Magee, L., Ferrinda, M., St. Pierre, J., & Third, A. (2024). Inclusive online learning in Australia: Barriers and enablers. Education and Information Technologies, 1-30.

Theoretical / Conceptual:
Munn, L., Magee, L., & Arora, V. (2024). Truth machines: synthesizing veracity in AI language models. AI & society, 39(6), 2759-2773.


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GPT-4o: “Generate a portrait of this reviewer 2” Develop Your Inner Critic…

Before Submission:
Self review (print / highlight / red pen)
Peer review
AI review:
“Review this paper as Reviewer 2…”;
“Be more Reviewer 2”
“Be even more Reviewer 2”
Iterate through drafts
Double-check citations, images, grammar etc

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Develop Your Inner Critic…

After Review:
Accepted: All good!
Minor Revisions: Do the Revisions
Major Revisions: Do the Revisions
Revise and Resubmit: Do the Revisions
Rejected: Revise / Consider / Resubmit



Revise Carefully:
Format All Reviewer Responses in a table
Update the text
Write a cover letter to the editor – thanking the reviewers (even when you don’t want to!)
No need to agree to every comment - but respond and justify response
Balanced tone – appreciative not sycophantic



| Reviewer # | Comment | Response |
| 1 | Add references X, Y, Z | Thank you for this comment. We added references X, Y, Z |


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You have the perfect journal article… what next?

Pick a journal (last week’s lecture)
Wait (3-12 months!)… and Prepare for Criticism…
What are the main areas of criticism?
Not answering (and sometimes not mentioning!) the research question
Not addressing all the literature (especially recent literature)
Not choosing theories and methods appropriate to the research question
Not mentioning, explaining and justifying limitations
Not considering issues of validity (is it true?) and reliability (can it be reproduced?)
Being too dogmatic – not calibrating for alternative views, criticisms, scepticism
General quality issues (grammar, organization, referencing, image quality etc)


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Practice Critique…

Review Colleagues’ Work
Do Peer Review for Good Journals
Join Editorial Boards
Get Experience with Diverse Articles and Distinctions:
Qual / Quant / Mixed Methods
Empirical / Theoretical / Historical
Articles vs Book / Book Chapters vs Essays vs Reviews
Disciplinary Differences (Humanities vs Social Sciences vs Sciences)